Post by qohart on Oct 27, 2009 13:56:34 GMT -8
Many thanks to my beta reader, Pet, who set me straight on a few things and couldn’t convince me on a few others. She said you can’t convince a stone.
The Night of The Revealing Wall
by Cris Hart
The violent storm thundering down the mountains into the wooded valley did not outwardly affect the three pale figures moving hurriedly toward their home. The violence pursuing them was of much more concern to them. After so many years fleeing from it, they were determined their plight would end this night. This Halloween night, the truth would finally be revealed.
The shrieking wind whipped the topcoats of the two horsemen, forcing them open to billow out behind them. Both men held their heads slightly down trying to keep the stinging rain out of their faces as they struggled to pull the coats closed again. It was a delicate balance keeping rain out of their eyes and still prevent it from sliding into their collars and down their backs. Thick limbs swayed and reached their bare talons toward them as the storm picked up in intensity and one man hurriedly raised a hand to his hat to keep it from being snatched off his head.
James West and his partner Artemus Gordon were slowly making their way west directly into the maelstrom. Jim pulled the collar of his coat higher as rain streamed from the brim of his hat down into his clothes. He saw Artie shiver and knew the cold water was trickling down his back as well. More cold rain and wind whipped through the black as pitch woods around them. On this Halloween night, there were no treats and the only trick now was getting safely through the trees.
Booming thunder and bright, white flashes of lightening crashed directly above their heads causing their mounts to shy skittishly. Lightening struck a nearby tree as they passed. The horses whinnied franticly and reared. The agents struggled to keep them under control. Blackjack spun two complete circles before Jim was able to calm him and regain control. His soothing words were barely audible over the roaring wind so he leaned forward to stroke the black’s neck as he calmed him.
Jim looked around for his partner and saw Artie picking himself up from a large puddle of mud. He still held Mesa’s reins and now stood directly in front of the rearing animal pulling down on them gently until the horse kept all fours on the ground. Jim waited patiently as Artie retrieved his hat and mounted up again.
"We have to find shelter," Artie yelled over the whine of the storm.
"Agreed. Keep your eyes open for anyplace we can hole up for the night. Then we’ll push on at first light," Jim shouted back as they continued on carefully, ducking whipping branches.
The storm made it difficult for them to see more than a few feet ahead of them. Jim spotted a narrow path, veering off deeper into the woods. He pointed it out to Artie using gestures instead of words, and they followed it. The farther they rode the fiercer the storm grew. The thunder peeled so loud it made the agent’s ears ring. The lightning sizzled all around sending waves of shimmering static tickling up their spines. Another tree was struck its trunk exploding into two.
After what seemed an eternity later, the path led them to a crookedly leaning abandoned house. As lightning flashed brightly, the windows in the structure, two upstairs and four downstairs, lit up in reflection. In that moment, the house appeared to be laughing at them.
Jim rode up to the front steps, Artie hung back warily, not liking the looks of the house. Lightning crackled so close behind him the hairs on the back of his neck stood up and Mesa threatened to dump him again. Reluctantly he moved forward to join his partner.
Jim had brought his horse up onto the porch offering it a bit of shelter, and tied him to the railing. Artie dismounted and led his horse up tethering it near Jim's. Simultaneously thunder roared as loud as cannon fire and lightning flashed. Artie ducked as though the storm itself had physically swung at him and Jim grinned at his partner’s reaction. He tried the door, which opened awkwardly.
They stepped into the dark interior. The house had the musty smell of being long empty. Almost immediately Artie tripped over a dark lump in the narrow hallway.
“You all right?” Jim asked unable to see in the utter darkness.
“Yeah,” he heard his partner grunt as he got up from the floor. “Get the candles from the saddlebags, will you, Jim?” Artie asked unwilling to move any further without some light.
“Be right back,” Jim answered and Artie heard him step out the door and return moments later.
"I guess this is home for the night," Jim said, his voice echoing into the emptiness. He struck a Lucifer and lit a tallow candle casting a dim yellow glow.
"How about just until the storm lets up," Artie answered peering around the foyer. A shattered chair lay in a pile of kindling in the middle of the floor. Arte pushed it over to the wall with his foot clearing the way.
Jim lit the other candle he’d brought in, which offered a little more light, and handed it to his partner.
They peered around at their surroundings. The foyer was small with a room to each side and a staircase centered at the back. Artie moved left and Jim went right. Artie opened the door and took a quick look into the room. It was empty with a thick layer of dust covering the floor and cobwebs hanging in long strands almost forming a curtain they were so dense. He could just make out a door on the far right wall and he weaved his way through the cobwebs to look in. A small cast iron stove was all that this room contained. Artie closed the door and made his way back to the foyer.
“Appears to have been a dining room,” he said brushing clinging cobwebs from his arms and hair. “There’s a stove in a small kitchen beyond it.”
“Parlor on this side,” Jim answered. “Want to take a look upstairs?”
Artie grimaced as he looked up the staircase. “For what?” he asked.
Jim shrugged and didn’t pursue it any further. He led the way into the parlor.
"At least there's a couple of chairs in here," Jim announced putting the candle on the mantle and taking his soaked coat off. He shook water from it and draped it across the back of one of the chairs.
Artie did not answer as he set his candle on the mantle and pealed out of his equally wet coat placing it on the back of the other chair. He shivered, as he looked around the dimly lit room feeling ill at ease.
"What's the matter?" Jim asked watching his partner.
"This place gives me the willies," Artie answered quietly. He rubbed his hands up and down his arms trying to generate some warmth.
Jim chuckled, "It's shelter, that's all I care about," he replied. He found a few remnants of candles in the drawer of a writing desk and lit them off the first. The room brightened a little more. “We better get the horses settled,” he suggested.
“Where?” Artie asked.
“They’ll be all right on the porch. It’s not ideal but its shelter for them,” Jim offered.
Together unsaddled their horses and rubbed them down as best they could then closed the door and returned to the parlor.
Jim tossed their saddlebags down next to the chairs. “That’s done,” he commented.
Artie suddenly turned to face the far wall. "Did you hear something?" he asked Jim.
"No. What did you hear?" Jim asked coming alert.
"Sounded like something scratching in the wall," Artie answered staring at a spot on the far wall.
Jim relaxed, rolling his eyes. "What did you expect? There's probably a family of squirrels in the walls," he said coming up behind his friend. He laid his hand on Artie's shoulder making him startle and whirl to face Jim.
"What's the matter with you!" Artie shouted at Jim.
Jim began to laugh outright. "Relax, Artie," he said through his laughter, "I was just going to suggest we start a fire in the fireplace and warm up."
"Oh. Good idea," Artie answered, glancing over his shoulder at the wall. "What are we going to use as fuel?"
Jim looked around. The room was nearly empty except for the two arm chairs facing the fireplace and the writing table with a broken leg leaning against the wall by the door where he’d found the candle stubs.
"That's already broken," Jim pointed to the table, "Let's start with that."
“And there’s that splintered chair in the foyer,” Artie added going to retrieve the pieces.
They broke the table into pieces and stacked them and some of the pieces of chair in the fireplace. Artie reached in and opened the flue, a shower of long abandoned bird's nests remnants fluttering down on him. Disgustedly he brushed them off his arm and used his toe to push the dried twigs under their stack of furniture parts.
Jim lit them and soon the dried wood caught and began to blaze. They stood in front of the fire letting it warm their cold bodies.
"Think anyone still owns this place?" Artie wondered extending his hands over the flames.
"Doesn't look like it. If someone does, they're not going to be happy we burned their writing table," Jim joked. He suddenly turned to look toward the wall Artie had heard scratching from before.
"You heard it?" Artie asked expectantly.
"Yeah, Artie, I heard it," Jim agreed. "Like I said," he began but Artie cut him off.
The Night of The Revealing Wall
by Cris Hart
The violent storm thundering down the mountains into the wooded valley did not outwardly affect the three pale figures moving hurriedly toward their home. The violence pursuing them was of much more concern to them. After so many years fleeing from it, they were determined their plight would end this night. This Halloween night, the truth would finally be revealed.
The shrieking wind whipped the topcoats of the two horsemen, forcing them open to billow out behind them. Both men held their heads slightly down trying to keep the stinging rain out of their faces as they struggled to pull the coats closed again. It was a delicate balance keeping rain out of their eyes and still prevent it from sliding into their collars and down their backs. Thick limbs swayed and reached their bare talons toward them as the storm picked up in intensity and one man hurriedly raised a hand to his hat to keep it from being snatched off his head.
James West and his partner Artemus Gordon were slowly making their way west directly into the maelstrom. Jim pulled the collar of his coat higher as rain streamed from the brim of his hat down into his clothes. He saw Artie shiver and knew the cold water was trickling down his back as well. More cold rain and wind whipped through the black as pitch woods around them. On this Halloween night, there were no treats and the only trick now was getting safely through the trees.
Booming thunder and bright, white flashes of lightening crashed directly above their heads causing their mounts to shy skittishly. Lightening struck a nearby tree as they passed. The horses whinnied franticly and reared. The agents struggled to keep them under control. Blackjack spun two complete circles before Jim was able to calm him and regain control. His soothing words were barely audible over the roaring wind so he leaned forward to stroke the black’s neck as he calmed him.
Jim looked around for his partner and saw Artie picking himself up from a large puddle of mud. He still held Mesa’s reins and now stood directly in front of the rearing animal pulling down on them gently until the horse kept all fours on the ground. Jim waited patiently as Artie retrieved his hat and mounted up again.
"We have to find shelter," Artie yelled over the whine of the storm.
"Agreed. Keep your eyes open for anyplace we can hole up for the night. Then we’ll push on at first light," Jim shouted back as they continued on carefully, ducking whipping branches.
The storm made it difficult for them to see more than a few feet ahead of them. Jim spotted a narrow path, veering off deeper into the woods. He pointed it out to Artie using gestures instead of words, and they followed it. The farther they rode the fiercer the storm grew. The thunder peeled so loud it made the agent’s ears ring. The lightning sizzled all around sending waves of shimmering static tickling up their spines. Another tree was struck its trunk exploding into two.
After what seemed an eternity later, the path led them to a crookedly leaning abandoned house. As lightning flashed brightly, the windows in the structure, two upstairs and four downstairs, lit up in reflection. In that moment, the house appeared to be laughing at them.
Jim rode up to the front steps, Artie hung back warily, not liking the looks of the house. Lightning crackled so close behind him the hairs on the back of his neck stood up and Mesa threatened to dump him again. Reluctantly he moved forward to join his partner.
Jim had brought his horse up onto the porch offering it a bit of shelter, and tied him to the railing. Artie dismounted and led his horse up tethering it near Jim's. Simultaneously thunder roared as loud as cannon fire and lightning flashed. Artie ducked as though the storm itself had physically swung at him and Jim grinned at his partner’s reaction. He tried the door, which opened awkwardly.
They stepped into the dark interior. The house had the musty smell of being long empty. Almost immediately Artie tripped over a dark lump in the narrow hallway.
“You all right?” Jim asked unable to see in the utter darkness.
“Yeah,” he heard his partner grunt as he got up from the floor. “Get the candles from the saddlebags, will you, Jim?” Artie asked unwilling to move any further without some light.
“Be right back,” Jim answered and Artie heard him step out the door and return moments later.
"I guess this is home for the night," Jim said, his voice echoing into the emptiness. He struck a Lucifer and lit a tallow candle casting a dim yellow glow.
"How about just until the storm lets up," Artie answered peering around the foyer. A shattered chair lay in a pile of kindling in the middle of the floor. Arte pushed it over to the wall with his foot clearing the way.
Jim lit the other candle he’d brought in, which offered a little more light, and handed it to his partner.
They peered around at their surroundings. The foyer was small with a room to each side and a staircase centered at the back. Artie moved left and Jim went right. Artie opened the door and took a quick look into the room. It was empty with a thick layer of dust covering the floor and cobwebs hanging in long strands almost forming a curtain they were so dense. He could just make out a door on the far right wall and he weaved his way through the cobwebs to look in. A small cast iron stove was all that this room contained. Artie closed the door and made his way back to the foyer.
“Appears to have been a dining room,” he said brushing clinging cobwebs from his arms and hair. “There’s a stove in a small kitchen beyond it.”
“Parlor on this side,” Jim answered. “Want to take a look upstairs?”
Artie grimaced as he looked up the staircase. “For what?” he asked.
Jim shrugged and didn’t pursue it any further. He led the way into the parlor.
"At least there's a couple of chairs in here," Jim announced putting the candle on the mantle and taking his soaked coat off. He shook water from it and draped it across the back of one of the chairs.
Artie did not answer as he set his candle on the mantle and pealed out of his equally wet coat placing it on the back of the other chair. He shivered, as he looked around the dimly lit room feeling ill at ease.
"What's the matter?" Jim asked watching his partner.
"This place gives me the willies," Artie answered quietly. He rubbed his hands up and down his arms trying to generate some warmth.
Jim chuckled, "It's shelter, that's all I care about," he replied. He found a few remnants of candles in the drawer of a writing desk and lit them off the first. The room brightened a little more. “We better get the horses settled,” he suggested.
“Where?” Artie asked.
“They’ll be all right on the porch. It’s not ideal but its shelter for them,” Jim offered.
Together unsaddled their horses and rubbed them down as best they could then closed the door and returned to the parlor.
Jim tossed their saddlebags down next to the chairs. “That’s done,” he commented.
Artie suddenly turned to face the far wall. "Did you hear something?" he asked Jim.
"No. What did you hear?" Jim asked coming alert.
"Sounded like something scratching in the wall," Artie answered staring at a spot on the far wall.
Jim relaxed, rolling his eyes. "What did you expect? There's probably a family of squirrels in the walls," he said coming up behind his friend. He laid his hand on Artie's shoulder making him startle and whirl to face Jim.
"What's the matter with you!" Artie shouted at Jim.
Jim began to laugh outright. "Relax, Artie," he said through his laughter, "I was just going to suggest we start a fire in the fireplace and warm up."
"Oh. Good idea," Artie answered, glancing over his shoulder at the wall. "What are we going to use as fuel?"
Jim looked around. The room was nearly empty except for the two arm chairs facing the fireplace and the writing table with a broken leg leaning against the wall by the door where he’d found the candle stubs.
"That's already broken," Jim pointed to the table, "Let's start with that."
“And there’s that splintered chair in the foyer,” Artie added going to retrieve the pieces.
They broke the table into pieces and stacked them and some of the pieces of chair in the fireplace. Artie reached in and opened the flue, a shower of long abandoned bird's nests remnants fluttering down on him. Disgustedly he brushed them off his arm and used his toe to push the dried twigs under their stack of furniture parts.
Jim lit them and soon the dried wood caught and began to blaze. They stood in front of the fire letting it warm their cold bodies.
"Think anyone still owns this place?" Artie wondered extending his hands over the flames.
"Doesn't look like it. If someone does, they're not going to be happy we burned their writing table," Jim joked. He suddenly turned to look toward the wall Artie had heard scratching from before.
"You heard it?" Artie asked expectantly.
"Yeah, Artie, I heard it," Jim agreed. "Like I said," he began but Artie cut him off.